Tuesday, 9 June 2009

Expanding Sentences


You have heard me several times asking you to expand your ideas when writing. I bet you will be amazed by this site. See how a simple sentence as "I made tea" can become a detailed text.

Task:
  • Go to the website: http://www.telescopictext.com/. You will see the sentence with shaded words.
  • Click on a shaded and see that part of the sentence expand. Read the new sentence and then choose another part to click on.
I thank Nik Peachey for sharing this!

Let me know what you think about this site.
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous10 June 2009 at 13:31

    It was amazing how with 3 words you could make a hole paragraph it was so good
    bye, Nicky

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  2. Anonymous10 June 2009 at 22:47

    Fantastic that with many little words you could make a paragraph. Excelent great job.
    bye Guido

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  3. Alina16 June 2009 at 15:06

    It was AMAZING AND UNBELIVEABLE to see how a short sentence could turn into a COMPLETE paragraph, it was so detailed and well made, I thought that it would never end because it was a so great job that I didn`t know what`s next!
    It was an excellent and very well made job.
    Kisses

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